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What did she think about?
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@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ slipped out from under her arm and fell back further into the pit, dislodging
other precariously piled corpses and threatening to start a charnel avalanche
which would bury Gideon in fresh human remains.
"OMG Gideon what are you doing!? You let it go! I swear on our eternal rotting
"OMG Gideon what are you doing!? You let it go! I swear on the eternal rotting
goddess, if you don't bring my body back in one piece I'll personally feed your
fingers to the ommigrindr. I'm not bluffing!"
@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ minutes, the gently used, previously owned, second hand flesh-houses of humans
measured eternity as they periodically tumbled into a stinking scarab-infested
cavern below.
The bodies came from all over. Most were offered by devout descendants of their
The bodies came from all over. Most were offered by devout descendants of
lately devout worshippers of Derketo, the queen of death, fertility, and rancid
body fluids apparently. The Emperor Undying sent a steady supply of
'retired' slaves from the arena or the mines. The army contributed a regular,
@ -109,19 +109,19 @@ corpus back up towards her like a yo-yo. The force of it did flick the
morsel of dried princess meat into the air for just a second ... before it
tumbled neatly through the aperture into the void below.
The immortal soul of the dead princess screamed like a solstice morning
The immortal soul of the dead princess screamed like a summer solstice
sacrifice victim from out of the depths of Gideon's skull. Gideon hadn't
thought her head had such impressive acoustics but the spirit of the princess
of misery's miserable shriek was reverberating through her brain like a
of misery's miserable shriek was reverberating through her brain like an
amphitheatre. The linen wrap in her hand went momentarily slack as the body
tumbled through space but then snapped taught with a sickening crack. Surely,
the princesses body should have crumbled into dust at that shock. But no, the
the princess's body should have crumbled into dust at that shock. But no, the
conscientious embalmers of yesteryear must have done a good job of converting
the petulant bitch's remains into sturdy taxidermy because it merely flexed
slightly and held together. The same clever embalmer, bless her heart, must
the petulant bitch's remains into some sturdy taxidermy because it merely flexed
slightly and held together. The same clever embalmer, bless her spleen, must
also have had the fortuitous foresight to tie the shroud tightly around
something, probably the princesses dainty little neck, as insurance against
exactly today's eventuality.
something, probably a dainty little neck, as insurance against exactly today's
turn of events.
Gideon held firmly to the thin linen ribbon and could feel the body begin to
swing at the other end. It was light at least. It hadn't caused her to lose