From 2cab13d8bcbfebad1e10d01ea38b39629359edd1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pvalchev Date: Wed, 18 Jun 2003 21:43:40 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] nitpicks/spelling fixes/wording improvements from Nick Nauwelaerts --- games/cosmosmash/pkg/DESCR | 2 +- games/hackdata/Makefile | 4 ++-- games/newvox/Makefile | 4 ++-- games/qstat/Makefile | 4 ++-- games/sdlroids/pkg/DESCR | 4 ++-- games/toppler/Makefile | 4 ++-- games/uqm/pkg/DESCR | 1 - games/xboing/Makefile | 4 ++-- games/xbreaky/pkg/DESCR | 2 +- games/xdino/pkg/DESCR | 3 +-- games/xjewel/pkg/DESCR | 4 ++-- games/xripple/pkg/DESCR | 4 ++-- games/xsol/pkg/DESCR | 2 -- games/xsoldier/pkg/DESCR | 1 - 14 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-) diff --git a/games/cosmosmash/pkg/DESCR b/games/cosmosmash/pkg/DESCR index 357ff7eafed..48c681345ce 100644 --- a/games/cosmosmash/pkg/DESCR +++ b/games/cosmosmash/pkg/DESCR @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ Cosmosmash is a clone of the 1981 Astrosmash video game. Spin, Blast and shoot -your way through a hostile universe of tumbling steriods and homicidal aliens. +your way through a hostile universe of tumbling asteriods and homicidal aliens. You've got the wits and the speed, but you're awesomely outnumbered. WWW: ${HOMEPAGE} diff --git a/games/hackdata/Makefile b/games/hackdata/Makefile index 0dd05c1f2e7..62ba3dadf25 100644 --- a/games/hackdata/Makefile +++ b/games/hackdata/Makefile @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# $OpenBSD: Makefile,v 1.10 2003/03/01 11:20:37 espie Exp $ +# $OpenBSD: Makefile,v 1.11 2003/06/18 21:43:40 pvalchev Exp $ -COMMENT= 'common data for the nethack/slash ports' +COMMENT= "common data for the nethack/slash ports" DISTNAME= nethack-3.4.1 PKGNAME= hackdata-3.4.1 CATEGORIES= games diff --git a/games/newvox/Makefile b/games/newvox/Makefile index ff7660db767..d48fa09b332 100644 --- a/games/newvox/Makefile +++ b/games/newvox/Makefile @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@ -# $OpenBSD: Makefile,v 1.5 2002/12/29 15:10:08 fgsch Exp $ +# $OpenBSD: Makefile,v 1.6 2003/06/18 21:43:40 pvalchev Exp $ COMMENT= "voxel-style landscape rendering fly-by" DISTNAME= newvox-1.0 CATEGORIES= games -HOMEPAGE= http://www.libsdl.org/projects/newvox +HOMEPAGE= http://www.libsdl.org/projects/newvox/ MASTER_SITES= ${HOMEPAGE}/src/ diff --git a/games/qstat/Makefile b/games/qstat/Makefile index 54de215e919..8b3ac9c0087 100644 --- a/games/qstat/Makefile +++ b/games/qstat/Makefile @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# $OpenBSD: Makefile,v 1.2 2002/10/26 20:44:39 naddy Exp $ +# $OpenBSD: Makefile,v 1.3 2003/06/18 21:43:40 pvalchev Exp $ COMMENT= "displays the status of multi-player Internet Game servers" @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ CATEGORIES= games MAINTAINER= Aaron Campbell -HOMEPAGE= http://www.qstat.org +HOMEPAGE= http://www.qstat.org/ PERMIT_PACKAGE_CDROM= Yes PERMIT_PACKAGE_FTP= Yes diff --git a/games/sdlroids/pkg/DESCR b/games/sdlroids/pkg/DESCR index 8a7ee9501f0..03eaca17a62 100644 --- a/games/sdlroids/pkg/DESCR +++ b/games/sdlroids/pkg/DESCR @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ The game can either run in windowed mode or in fullscreen mode. You can (usually) switch between them during play by pressing Alt-Enter. The play area (apart from the score/lives/etc. display) is square -and centred, just like in the original Hyperoid did. This might -change, but for now that is how it works. +and centred, just like in the original Hyperoid. This might change, +but for now that is how it works. WWW: ${HOMEPAGE} diff --git a/games/toppler/Makefile b/games/toppler/Makefile index 48e7b2178b0..d4718617675 100644 --- a/games/toppler/Makefile +++ b/games/toppler/Makefile @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# $OpenBSD: Makefile,v 1.5 2002/12/29 15:10:08 fgsch Exp $ +# $OpenBSD: Makefile,v 1.6 2003/06/18 21:43:40 pvalchev Exp $ COMMENT= "Nebulous rewrite of Tower Toppler" @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ VERSION= 0.96 DISTNAME= toppler-${VERSION} CATEGORIES= games -HOMEPAGE= http://toppler.sourceforge.net +HOMEPAGE= http://toppler.sourceforge.net/ MAINTAINER= Lurene Grenier diff --git a/games/uqm/pkg/DESCR b/games/uqm/pkg/DESCR index b458f24be8d..370b1c4df21 100644 --- a/games/uqm/pkg/DESCR +++ b/games/uqm/pkg/DESCR @@ -12,4 +12,3 @@ introduction, a copy of which may be found here: http://www.classicgaming.com/starcontrol/sc2/sc2_hist.shtml WWW: ${HOMEPAGE} - diff --git a/games/xboing/Makefile b/games/xboing/Makefile index b112ef36a5f..6190872f41a 100644 --- a/games/xboing/Makefile +++ b/games/xboing/Makefile @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# $OpenBSD: Makefile,v 1.16 2002/10/26 20:44:39 naddy Exp $ +# $OpenBSD: Makefile,v 1.17 2003/06/18 21:43:40 pvalchev Exp $ -COMMENT= "X11 arcade" +COMMENT= "blockout style game for X11" DISTNAME= xboing2.4 PKGNAME= xboing-2.4 diff --git a/games/xbreaky/pkg/DESCR b/games/xbreaky/pkg/DESCR index cf000d8140c..8c356f5e52b 100644 --- a/games/xbreaky/pkg/DESCR +++ b/games/xbreaky/pkg/DESCR @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ Xbreaky is a version of the old Breakout/Arkanoid game, written for -X Window syste. +the X Window System. The objective of this arcade game is to break all the bricks with a ball that bounces off the walls and a paddle that you can move. You start by diff --git a/games/xdino/pkg/DESCR b/games/xdino/pkg/DESCR index 714411d51b7..2604f7fbca0 100644 --- a/games/xdino/pkg/DESCR +++ b/games/xdino/pkg/DESCR @@ -1,5 +1,4 @@ -XDino, dino puzzle game for X-Window. +XDino, dino puzzle game for the X Window System. XDino is the puzzle game like as a rubik's cube, not 9 but 4 pieces on a surface. - diff --git a/games/xjewel/pkg/DESCR b/games/xjewel/pkg/DESCR index 0f0e41fc2fc..d6b01b18863 100644 --- a/games/xjewel/pkg/DESCR +++ b/games/xjewel/pkg/DESCR @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -Xjewel is a droping block game akin to tetris. +Xjewel is a dropping block game akin to tetris. -It is played by controling the motion of blocks which continue to fall from +It is played by controlling the motion of blocks which continue to fall from the top of the screen. One can move them left and right, as well as rotate the jewel segments. The object is to get the most points before the grim reaper ends the fun. diff --git a/games/xripple/pkg/DESCR b/games/xripple/pkg/DESCR index 1a826ad3040..7f62b76a55d 100644 --- a/games/xripple/pkg/DESCR +++ b/games/xripple/pkg/DESCR @@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ This is a port of xripple, written by the Rasterman, aka. Carsten Haitzler. XRipple is a program that causes the bottom of the screen to ripple, like a pool of water. Not much else to say, really. -Carsten's ultra-cool homepage is at http://www.cse.unsw.edu.au/~s2154962/ -with more cool stuff. +Carsten's ultra-cool homepage is at http://www.rasterman.com/ with more +cool stuff. Note that xripple has no "official" version number. diff --git a/games/xsol/pkg/DESCR b/games/xsol/pkg/DESCR index cd81b8fae71..8318a999e0b 100644 --- a/games/xsol/pkg/DESCR +++ b/games/xsol/pkg/DESCR @@ -1,5 +1,3 @@ -xtetris 2.5.2 - xsol plays a solitaire game similar to Klondike. The playing field is made up of seven slots, where stacks are built in descending value with alternating suits. Aces are built on at the top, and ascending order in the diff --git a/games/xsoldier/pkg/DESCR b/games/xsoldier/pkg/DESCR index d12755a9a35..4531380c221 100644 --- a/games/xsoldier/pkg/DESCR +++ b/games/xsoldier/pkg/DESCR @@ -39,4 +39,3 @@ AUTHOR: Xsoldier home page is http://www.educ.info.kanagawa-u.ac.jp/~s945750/xsoldier.html -