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 Version 7.17 (not yet released)
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-Fixed a TOCTOU (time-of-check / time-of-use) bug that at least in theory
-arises between checking for the traditional data directory and creating a
-data directory later.  Also fixed a bug when the ``HOME`` environment
-variable is empty: use the current directory instead.
+Fixed two TOCTOU (time-of-check / time-of-use) bugs that arose between
+checking for the traditional data directory and creating a data directory
+later.  Also fixed a bug when the ``HOME`` environment variable is empty:
+use the current directory instead.
 
 Updated the Brazilian Portuguese, Norwegian Bokmål, Swedish, French,
 Esperanto, Serbian, German and English translations (in that order), with