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 ## Earth
 
-> Fuyoh, abe, we're homebound and we're still eating gummy. I can't believe it...
+!(img/flag/earth.png)
+
+> Haiya, abe, we're homebound and we're still eating gummy. I can't believe it...
+
+The Homeworld, the capital of capitals. Offworlders see the Earth as a shining, glizty place, full of life and riches beyond their wildest dreams.
+In truth, it's the same blue waterball as 700 years ago, just with more skyscrapers.
 
 ## Moon
 
-![img/flag/moon-small.png]
+!(img/flag/moon-small.png)
 
 > That a hein's cake, brat. We juwet, Dustball here is OB and he's ordered us put.
 
-Up until about 50 years ago, the Moon was a straw libertarian's paradise.
-Lavish resorts, caviar, corperation-owned infastructure, the Moon was seen as a shining symbol of Adam Smith's invisible hand...
+About 50 years ago, the Moon was a straw libertarian's paradise.
+Lavish resorts, caviar, corperation-owned infastructure, the Moon was seen as a shining symbol of Adam Smith's invisible hand,
+complete with massive, overworked, underpaid underclass.
 
-Up until the revolution happened.
+So, of couse the inevitable happened.
 
-![img/flag/lunar-revolution-small.png]
+!(img/flag/lunar-revolution-small.png)
+
+The Moon was consumed in a blaze of fire and glory, the corps were overthrown, and the common man could once again decide his fate.
+
+*for about a total of 4 days...*
+
+Unfortunately, the chaos further degenerated into an every-man-for-themselves murder-shoot-loot spree.
+Of course, sombody had to step up to control it all, and for the most part that fell to organised crime in it's various forms.
 
 ## Mars
 
-> Amige, sori, te llamo p'atras, Boss is asking me about the Shtaubman in the LBM's office.
+> Amige, sori, te yamo paatras, Boss is asking me about the Shtaubman in the LBM's office.
 
-Mars is the Americas, as the Americas were to Europe.
-A shining beacon of hope and industry with dreams of their own identity.
+Mars is the Americas, as the Americas were to Europe. A shining beacon of hope and industry with dreams of their own identity.
+Whenever you think of the sterotype of space as a boundless frontier full of new oppotunty, that's the general sort of vibe you get with Mars.
 
 ## Saturn
 
 > Good work, team. That's enough for today. Can't believe we've come so far.
 
+The most inhospitable colonised planet, Saturn's entire population consists mainly of miners and researchers,
+with a notable exception being a single sports stadium.
+