added outline
This commit is contained in:
parent
c42f597c96
commit
8b3f7ba4d8
84
PEID.otl
84
PEID.otl
@ -17,11 +17,93 @@ Poor Ed is Dead
|
||||
: and took Poor Edward to Hell.
|
||||
I knew her too well
|
||||
: This story isn't about Edward. It isn't entirely about
|
||||
: her, either. It is about me and what I knew about her.
|
||||
: her, either. It is about me and how I knew her so well.
|
||||
: And what I know now.
|
||||
She was his devil twin
|
||||
Were they both devils?
|
||||
Things heard only in hell.
|
||||
Did he understand words said only in Hell?
|
||||
Or did she speak to him but only listeners in Hell could here?
|
||||
It makes sense if they were devil twins that they would return together to Hell.
|
||||
Bound together for life
|
||||
: Does this mean they were bound together until they died?
|
||||
: Or does it mean they were bound together for the purpose of being
|
||||
: alive? As in being bound together was a prerequisite for either of
|
||||
: them to get to experience life? Again, as devil twins they would
|
||||
: share this parameter.
|
||||
Or a young girl?
|
||||
: Why is her age the dominant mystery? What is the range of possible
|
||||
: ages we contemplate for her? What about Edward's age? Doe he have a
|
||||
: man's face or a young boys?
|
||||
Whose head was it anyway?
|
||||
: Would she agree that she was on the back of Edward's head or was he on
|
||||
: the back of hers?
|
||||
I knew her to well
|
||||
: Did she speak to me too? What did she say to me? Were these also words
|
||||
: heard only in hell? Where am I from?
|
||||
Outline
|
||||
: I have no idea how writers write outlines for their stories.
|
||||
Chapter Ideas
|
||||
She spoke to me.
|
||||
Meeting her online
|
||||
Masked in a game. She 'makes' me. There is another word
|
||||
: A word that means she sees through my pseudo and spots me for
|
||||
: what I am: an online cross-dresser. Try to find a way to capture
|
||||
: the most embarrassing way for that to occur. She catches me but
|
||||
: is also able to stop me from running... no, better yet she lets
|
||||
: me ditch and run; destroy my online profile; come back again and
|
||||
: she makes me all over again. It's a game to her. She's dying
|
||||
: laughing.
|
||||
Caligula
|
||||
: Could even put that game in here. Events could occur in Cali...
|
||||
: with plebs and pats and the guild and the necrolord Gaius etc.
|
||||
Friendship
|
||||
: Somehow after teasing and bullying me online in my favourite
|
||||
: game she win me over. She claims my trust or interest at least.
|
||||
: I might develop a small hopeless, unrequited crush on her but
|
||||
: nothing that overtakes the core attraction: her hints of
|
||||
: forbidden knowledge. I guess that her powers and even her
|
||||
: existence hint at forbidden knowledge. Knowledge that I
|
||||
: desperately desire. Sorcery.
|
||||
Meeting Edward.
|
||||
: Eventually she will convince me that I need to meet Edward. In
|
||||
: person.
|
||||
Who is the demon?
|
||||
: So it might either be her or Edward. Not sure. The demon can't
|
||||
: teach me sorcery on its own. Only the sorcerer can initiate me
|
||||
: into lore. Perhaps.
|
||||
Does it matter?
|
||||
: Check the book for rules, but I doubt they exist, on this.
|
||||
So who cares, what about the meeting?
|
||||
: Whoever the sorcerer is, only meeting in person will allow me to
|
||||
: be initiated. Why am I a suitable candidate? Does it matter?
|
||||
What does it cost?
|
||||
: Meeting in person means travelling. I can't think of a situation
|
||||
: with more awkward obstacles to travelling like this than the
|
||||
: present time and place.
|
||||
COVID etc.
|
||||
Where are they?
|
||||
The first place that came to mind was California.
|
||||
The second was London.
|
||||
: But that out of the way, they could be anywhere. Take some time,
|
||||
: think it through. No rush.
|
||||
Where was I?
|
||||
The first place to come to mind is Halifax. But do I want it?
|
||||
Do I want to truk with real places? I kinda do but...
|
||||
: Well try Halifax to start with. Will that sink the project? I
|
||||
: guess I don't care do I.
|
||||
So how about the meeting.
|
||||
: Well besides the international travel, during a pandemic, I (the
|
||||
: protagonist and narrator) will have a full time job and a
|
||||
: family. So it's going to be crazy to come up with a pre-text for
|
||||
: this trip. Will it even be possible?
|
||||
:
|
||||
: Might even require some serious research to come up with a plan.
|
||||
|
||||
|
||||
|
||||
|
||||
|
||||
|
||||
|
||||
|
||||
|
Loading…
Reference in New Issue
Block a user