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 	: and took Poor Edward to Hell.
 I knew her too well
 	: This story isn't about Edward. It isn't entirely about 
-	: her, either. It is about me and what I knew about her.
+	: her, either. It is about me and how I knew her so well.
 	: And what I know now.
 	She was his devil twin
 		Were they both devils?
+	Things heard only in hell.
 		Did he understand words said only in Hell?
 		Or did she speak to him but only listeners in Hell could here?
 		It makes sense if they were devil twins that they would return together to Hell.
+	Bound together for life
+		: Does this mean they were bound together until they died?
+		: Or does it mean they were bound together for the purpose of being
+		: alive? As in being bound together was a prerequisite for either of
+		: them to get to experience life? Again, as devil twins they would
+		: share this parameter.
+	Or a young girl? 
+		: Why is her age the dominant mystery? What is the range of possible
+		: ages we contemplate for her? What about Edward's age? Doe he have a
+		: man's face or a young boys?
+	Whose head was it anyway?
+		: Would she agree that she was on the back of Edward's head or was he on
+		: the back of hers? 
+I knew her to well
+	: Did she speak to me too? What did she say to me? Were these also words
+	: heard only in hell? Where am I from?
+Outline
+	: I have no idea how writers write outlines for their stories.
+Chapter Ideas
+	She spoke to me.
+		Meeting her online 
+			Masked in a game. She 'makes' me. There is another word
+			: A word that means she sees through my pseudo and spots me for
+			: what I am: an online cross-dresser. Try to find a way to capture
+			: the most embarrassing way for that to occur. She catches me but
+			: is also able to stop me from running... no, better yet she lets
+			: me ditch and run; destroy my online profile; come back again and
+			: she makes me all over again. It's a game to her. She's dying
+			: laughing. 
+			Caligula
+			: Could even put that game in here. Events could occur in Cali...
+			: with plebs and pats and the guild and the necrolord Gaius etc. 
+			Friendship
+			: Somehow after teasing and bullying me online in my favourite
+			: game she win me over. She claims my trust or interest at least.
+			: I might develop a small hopeless, unrequited crush on her but
+			: nothing that overtakes the core attraction: her hints of
+			: forbidden knowledge. I guess that her powers and even her
+			: existence hint at forbidden knowledge. Knowledge that I
+			: desperately desire. Sorcery.
+	Meeting Edward.
+		: Eventually she will convince me that I need to meet Edward. In
+		: person. 
+		Who is the demon?
+			: So it might either be her or Edward. Not sure. The demon can't
+			: teach me sorcery on its own. Only the sorcerer can initiate me
+			: into lore. Perhaps. 
+			Does it matter?
+				: Check the book for rules, but I doubt they exist, on this.
+		So who cares, what about the meeting?
+			: Whoever the sorcerer is, only meeting in person will allow me to
+			: be initiated. Why am I a suitable candidate? Does it matter? 
+		What does it cost?
+			: Meeting in person means travelling. I can't think of a situation
+			: with more awkward obstacles to travelling like this than the
+			: present time and place. 
+			COVID etc.
+		Where are they?
+			The first place that came to mind was California.
+			The second was London.
+			: But that out of the way, they could be anywhere. Take some time,
+			: think it through. No rush.
+		Where was I?
+			The first place to come to mind is Halifax. But do I want it?
+			Do I want to truk with real places? I kinda do but...
+			: Well try Halifax to start with. Will that sink the project? I
+			: guess I don't care do I.
+		So how about the meeting.
+			: Well besides the international travel, during a pandemic, I (the
+			: protagonist and narrator) will have a full time job and a
+			: family. So it's going to be crazy to come up with a pre-text for
+			: this trip. Will it even be possible? 
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+			: Might even require some serious research to come up with a plan.
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