From 8eba0573ec4516af99b252faf5b0d8bf2826d202 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: j3zibl Date: Tue, 23 Mar 2021 22:37:14 -0300 Subject: [PATCH] rude nude --- twofatal.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/twofatal.md b/twofatal.md index 5a3adfb..8991c6e 100644 --- a/twofatal.md +++ b/twofatal.md @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ possession. She never absorbed hat she could only ever see exactly what Gideon was seeing with her own, adequately functioning, eyeballs no more no less. Right now what Gideon was seeing was this: the precious corpse was starting to come unwound, its linen strips unravelling as it slipped and rolled -over fresher, more fetid, human remains on its way toward the aperture at the +over fresher, more moist(ick), human remains on its way toward the aperture at the bottom of the huge conical pit that Gideon had descended on a rescue mission for the terminally damned. The aperture was a narrow choke point exactly like the throat of an hourglass. But instead of sand measuring @@ -179,6 +179,6 @@ protecting Gideon's innocent eyes from fatal psychological trauma. Wrinkling her nose she continued the one-sided conversation. "I'm starting to feel seriously unappreciated around here." she confided to the -nude and dead body. "But fine, I take the hint. I'm out of here." And so, -then and there, she decided to escape. +rude, nude, but sweetly silent morsel of princessly pemmican. "But fine, I take +the hint. I'm out of here." And so, then and there, she decided to escape.