From 8ce8b53badc4b71bc666793abffea193af1bc1a3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Atlas Cove Date: Sat, 28 Oct 2023 10:44:48 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] update intro.md add detail, fix image syntax --- in/ee/intro.md | 34 +++++++++++++++++++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 25 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/in/ee/intro.md b/in/ee/intro.md index 64c989f..ed25e37 100644 --- a/in/ee/intro.md +++ b/in/ee/intro.md @@ -8,29 +8,45 @@ with each planet providing a different feel. ## Earth -> Fuyoh, abe, we're homebound and we're still eating gummy. I can't believe it... +!(img/flag/earth.png) + +> Haiya, abe, we're homebound and we're still eating gummy. I can't believe it... + +The Homeworld, the capital of capitals. Offworlders see the Earth as a shining, glizty place, full of life and riches beyond their wildest dreams. +In truth, it's the same blue waterball as 700 years ago, just with more skyscrapers. ## Moon -![img/flag/moon-small.png] +!(img/flag/moon-small.png) > That a hein's cake, brat. We juwet, Dustball here is OB and he's ordered us put. -Up until about 50 years ago, the Moon was a straw libertarian's paradise. -Lavish resorts, caviar, corperation-owned infastructure, the Moon was seen as a shining symbol of Adam Smith's invisible hand... +About 50 years ago, the Moon was a straw libertarian's paradise. +Lavish resorts, caviar, corperation-owned infastructure, the Moon was seen as a shining symbol of Adam Smith's invisible hand, +complete with massive, overworked, underpaid underclass. -Up until the revolution happened. +So, of couse the inevitable happened. -![img/flag/lunar-revolution-small.png] +!(img/flag/lunar-revolution-small.png) + +The Moon was consumed in a blaze of fire and glory, the corps were overthrown, and the common man could once again decide his fate. + +*for about a total of 4 days...* + +Unfortunately, the chaos further degenerated into an every-man-for-themselves murder-shoot-loot spree. +Of course, sombody had to step up to control it all, and for the most part that fell to organised crime in it's various forms. ## Mars -> Amige, sori, te llamo p'atras, Boss is asking me about the Shtaubman in the LBM's office. +> Amige, sori, te yamo paatras, Boss is asking me about the Shtaubman in the LBM's office. -Mars is the Americas, as the Americas were to Europe. -A shining beacon of hope and industry with dreams of their own identity. +Mars is the Americas, as the Americas were to Europe. A shining beacon of hope and industry with dreams of their own identity. +Whenever you think of the sterotype of space as a boundless frontier full of new oppotunty, that's the general sort of vibe you get with Mars. ## Saturn > Good work, team. That's enough for today. Can't believe we've come so far. +The most inhospitable colonised planet, Saturn's entire population consists mainly of miners and researchers, +with a notable exception being a single sports stadium. +